option1.
option2.
post critique with Assistant Professor Michael E. Kidwell.
The story/poem was a nice addition to the creepy imagery. But with the imagery and no poetry, maybe less is more. hmm? hmm?! Get rid of name on first panel; have another character word or just the picture? Simpler can be better. No screaming. Not emotional.
post critique with Assistant Professor Michael E. Kidwell.
The story/poem was a nice addition to the creepy imagery. But with the imagery and no poetry, maybe less is more. hmm? hmm?! Get rid of name on first panel; have another character word or just the picture? Simpler can be better. No screaming. Not emotional.
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