Showing posts with label HCD. Show all posts
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Wednesday, November 28, 2012

package redesign. the final.

The key concept for this focused around changing the brand’s current mode of appeal, which was ethos to logos. The intent was to focus on the informational and logical structure of the package, making the name less of a focal point, but rather the recipe and specific type of alcohol. I kept the Empire State Building as part of the design, but created the building with solid colored lines set at various heights. I kept the classic and elegant style of the initial design by using a mainly black design with an accent color for the specific type of alcohol.


front, back, front of the Gin, Vodka, and Berry Vodka bottles.

all of the twist-off bottle caps.

angled shot to show the color on insides to further differentiate alcohol types.

context shot of vodka bottles + redesign.

context shot of gin bottles + redesign.

my portfolio page.

Thursday, November 15, 2012

package redesign. further along+context shots.

Below are the changes from last class. Below are also some better studio shots of the bottles, as well as some context shots from a local grocery store. Not totally sure how I feel about my bottle design in comparison with the other options available at this store.

bottle fronts+backs.

bottle insides.


fronts.

backs.



lids.




vodka context.

gin context.

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

package redesign. 98% done.

For these designs I went back to the minimalistic type lock up that read "no. 485 straight gin New Amsterdam" and explored more from there. I wanted to find a way to reference the back and New Amsterdam/New York which I felt was no longer on the front of the bottle. Although I was to redesign the package, I felt that there was too much of a disconnect with the Empire Building being only on the back. The lines that I initially had wrapping around the bottle referencing the structure of the building was too abstract to make any kind of connection to the city.

My focus was to keep logos the main appeal, with a hint of ethos, with the brand name. The simplicity I feel helps to further advance the logos appeal, giving straight facts and not much more. Although the Konica(design printer) didn't quite print the colors as intense as they are in my files, I feel the bottle packages are still successful.

gin bottle front + back labels.

vodka bottle front + back labels.

red berry vodka bottle front + back labels.

bottle mock up fronts.

bottle mock up backs.

bottle mock up caps.

Tuesday, November 13, 2012

package redesigning. more iterations.

Based off of the feedback from Design Ranch and a bit from Sir Galloway I went back to the drawing board with the ideas that I had already established. My thoughts were to try to bring together the different options that I had before, but put the focus on a beautiful redesign. Below are some of the options that I was working with this past week.

Friday, November 9, 2012

package redesign mock up1.

bottle options for today...pre cut out.

bottle top options.

fronts of bottle options.

side of bottle options.

back of bottle options.

other side of bottle options.


feedback from Design Ranch.
the fronts are too subtle, make loud.
they like the Empire State Building.
add the little icons to the sides or back; it currently reads too much as ingredients.
make New Amsterdam larger on the front; make it a focus.
just have "no. 485" on top.
when people look for alcohol they're looking more for brand than recipe.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

package redesign digital sketches.

these are the digital sketches that I translated from the initial hand sketches.

 bottle option1(front, back + sides).

 bottle option2(front + back only).

 bottle option3(front + back only).

feedback from Sir Galloway.
The options in general seem to appeal to the same crowd, but is portraying the beverage in another way. The three options overall look pretty good. Think about adding color. Simplicity of text on bottle option3 is very nice, but think about moving "enhance your experience with" to the bottom...get rid of "with?" Break the structure grid more on bottle option1: have all four sides like the front? or have the front and back the same but sides full of lines? Make sure I keep my focus and push as much as I can to be pathos or logos. 

Friday, November 2, 2012

package redesign sketches 3. top 15.






feedback from class.
-designs that stood out "Be Distinct" + the pattern one + dealing with numbers
-think about maybe a more abstract front with a more detailed back
-the large 40 may just bring the connotation of beer 40s
-work more with numbers

Thursday, November 1, 2012

package redesign sketches 2.




my thoughts of where to move forward.
I really like the idea of the lime, ice cube and orange for the bottle...so I'm going to try hard to work with those. I'm also trying to continue with the idea of the name as a smaller, but central focus. And we shall see where else these next and final 15 directions leave me. :)

package redesign sketches 1.

some pathos examples.

some logos examples.

*explore these ideas in next set of 35*

*explore these ideas in next set of 35*

notes from me.
I really struggled with trying to "advertise"/push the gin on the audience via logos+pathos. I couldn't figure out how to best express those ideas. here's to hope it smooths out better in time.

post meeting with Sir Galloway notes+decisions.
mainly, it was decided that I should try to push away a bit from typography and try to embrace more imagery, (as most of the ideas shown were typography placed, which is OK, but to also explore imagery). 

the package redesign.

the initial redesign package.


text from New Amsterdamn's website explaining the company.
Before New York was New York, it was New Amsterdam. Now, the essence of the city has been distilled into the classic New York spirit - smooth enough to enjoy straight, distinctive enough to hold its own in any cocktail. Smoother by design, New Amsterdam spirits break from tradition with spirits that are modern, intriguing and smooth. Welcome to New Amsterdam. So smooth you can drink it straight.

text from New Amsterdam's website explaining the gin.
"From its modest origin, to the centerpiece of the perfect martini, gin is a legend nearly 400 years in the making. Today, New Amsterdam Gin takes a modern approach to this classic spirit. Every gin begins as a neutral, colorless spirit base. Intrigue arises when juniper and as many as 20 botanicals are added. The recipe combinations are infinite. No two gins are alike. And, no gin is like New Amsterdam. New Amsterdam Gin is crafted with botanicals, citrus elements and a light touch of juniper to create an unparalleled, smooth taste. A taste so smooth you can drink it straight."


information from other sources.
New Amsterdam's gin recipe is a contemporary take on classic gin's recipe.
The recipe for gin itself is over 400 years old.

Thursday, October 18, 2012

anat cohen. promotional material finals.

the final portfolio page.

the final program cover.

billboard finals+in context.


the final animated save-the-date.

“Organized chaos” is the theme that was chosen to represent the Anat Cohen Quartet. The main element used to emphasize that was the use of a combined instrument, using pieces from each of the instruments involved in this specific quartet. That graphic element and theme was used as the primary means of communication throughout all pieces of promotional materials. The idea of four people, four instruments, four lives coming together to form something larger than oneself is the more hidden idea behind the piece; following along the use of synecdoche and hyperbole. I wanted the uniting concept to not be easily understood and then discarded. I wanted the viewers to slowly understand what the connection was, similar to when one learns to tie their shoes as a child, one day it just clicks and from then on you continue the process. The main way that I personally view design is through the idea of learning/teaching/advancing our lives; designs are the way to divide information into more easily digestible lessons or bits of data. But simplifying what and how we present all information, we add the ability to have a greater connection to the viewer and a better way to educate in a variety of ways.

Based on the concept of education and educating, audience feedback was very important for me. I remember various times in my youth seeing promotional materials for performances in Chicago, or neighborhoods and didn’t often make the connection of what the performance was and whom it was advertised to. So, I wanted to make sure that I kept in mind, how varied an audience can be; especially when stated during the meeting with a representative of the Folly Theater that the theater was attempting to attract a younger audience. In my mind, that meant advertising to more than just the normal, everyday Folly Theater or jazz music lover; which really opened up the crowd to everyone. Luckily over the years I have attained friendships with a variety of a number of people from different backgrounds, tastes, personalities and ages; often, the one linking element was the love of art and music, the ability to express. I knew, that I had the prime group to attain some feedback on my project from; I knew that they would take the time to give some honest feedback. By taking in feedback from my classmates, Sir Galloway and the other varied people, I was able to look back at the data that each group gave and figure the best way to work it into the promotional materials.

My focus for the program cover was that it would be the most intimate piece of promotional material, that being stated it was similar to the poster, but attempted to make the viewer part of the experience. The cover is set up so the two halves of the constructed instrument line the sides of the paper, with the specific event information in the center; almost like a hug, the final enclosing embrace to help one remember the intimate event. The animation focused on the fluidity of the music and the constructed instrument as one being as if in mid-dance to the fluidity, further illustrating the rhetoric tropes. As my focus for the poster was the idea of showing what the mind cannot accept, the idea of our instruments as once; the focus was therefore more on the shock and intrigue appeal, whereas with the animation, the idea was bringing together everything about the performance that I could. I brought in the actual sound of the band, as well as kept the same appeal as the poster with the main use of the combined instrument to keep the intrigue. With the animation I was also able to focus moreso on where the viewer looked, when they did and for how long. This poses potential hazards, because if I did not correctly layout the information, or timing, the viewer may lose interest and stop watching, even at only 15 seconds. But, my focus was for the animation to start and end referencing the Folly, the location of where the event was. The next piece of information was the quartet, so mentally the connection was made early in the animation that the music in the background was the Anat Cohen Quartet. Then the date and time, because all though both of those piece of information are important, the viewer can easily look up the location and artist and find the time and date.

In the class thus far, I have looked a lot closer at not only the way I work, but also the way that I should be working. It is one thing to say that you have an amazing idea, but if you don’t jump right away to that idea, if you slowly work up to the idea, there lies the potential to come up with something that could be greater than it ended up being. I have a tendency to just jump to the specifics, the end product; I love my details. But, what I often forget about is the ability to push around ideas, get feedback from multiple fellow designers, as well as the potential public/audience. Sometimes I get too caught up in the early designing that I forget to circle back, make sure everything works and goes well together…and sometimes, I even forget about my favorite step, which is the research. I re-found my love of researching in the process and how beneficial researching can be. Had I not have researched again mid-process of sketches; I would not have learned that the Folly did not want the promotional materials to focus on the saxophone, but rather the clarinet. Sometimes I assume when I shouldn’t and that could have lead to a not well-formatted piece that the client wanted. I need to remind myself to slow, stop, think and breath because I am so excited to share and show the final piece that I forget crucial steps; so I am currently trying to reteach myself to fartlek, alternate between different running paces.

Wednesday, October 17, 2012

anat cohen. continued refinement portfolio page + animation.

layout 1, keeping a bit more dominance of the poster.

layout 2, staying more squared.