KC Fringe. professor feedback.

so, here is where I was going at the end of class Friday.

Professor Craig + Professor Paul feedback.

*for left side option: consider making the exclamation point a vector or an actual font + work on rest of letterforms

*for left side option: try "!" as vector and rest by hand or opposite

*for right side option: flip "i" into exclamation point. it informs the rest of the type. Maybe inverse the text? make every letterform formal except the i