I think your use of image is much stronger here than before. However, some of the type is still getting lost in the bubbles. I also think that you had better image options that I wish I was seeing here. Your photomontage posters are stronger (especially the third composition), but both grab my attention in a good way. I'm digging that serif typeface as her name, but not so much for the secondary information (this comment applies only to the bubble compositions and very few of the photomontage). Maybe try something clearer?
I know you didn't ask for my opinion, but there it is. Don't hate, appreciate. Prouduh you. Really really into that third photomontage composition. Really strong.
I think your use of image is much stronger here than before. However, some of the type is still getting lost in the bubbles. I also think that you had better image options that I wish I was seeing here. Your photomontage posters are stronger (especially the third composition), but both grab my attention in a good way. I'm digging that serif typeface as her name, but not so much for the secondary information (this comment applies only to the bubble compositions and very few of the photomontage). Maybe try something clearer?
ReplyDeleteI know you didn't ask for my opinion, but there it is. Don't hate, appreciate. Prouduh you. Really really into that third photomontage composition. Really strong.
I know the type is getting lost and that I'm not the best at it. Thanks for the feedback though.
ReplyDeletewell...4 didn't turn out as it should have....Tyler suggested looking between 4+5...or maybe going with bubbles number 4.
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