Below were my first attempts at digitizing the sketches that I completed last week, although none ended up as I had envisioned. I still need to do a lot of work to these concepts. I need to try working with bubbles to try to get what I am looking for. I also know that the typography is not resolved in the slightest, but I had put my main focus on the images and then placement+size of the text. I knew that the focus was to be "Anat Cohen Quartet" and a main illustration/image/depiction of the music+artists.
option 1.
option 2.
option 3.
comments from crit.
the third option was the most liked in class
-liked the use of text coming from the keys
-liked the dynamic shape that was made
-try different angles
-work with more contemporary typefaces (off the beat+path)
-create a more expressive layout
the first option
-liked the concept of it+saw that it was music
-work more with flowing water, it looks too static, a bit like a swimming pool
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