I did some edits based off of Professor Chapin's feedback and some own playing around with layers and edits.
"Silence: a Fable" | Solitude
Feedback: finalized - needs no work
"Silence: a Fable" | Insecurity
Feedback: finalized - needs no work
"Silence: A Fable" | Control
Feedback: The work is too static, too pattern-like, too uniform. Try adding a variation in color, or taking out switches - make it less like a pattern.
"Tell Tale Heart" | Time/Change
Feedback: Change the hands back, it looks too Photoshopped now. Perhaps try changing the eye?
"Tell Tale Heart" | Identity
Feedback: Too much grid texture in this piece. The eye is not really noticed right away, it takes time.
"Tell Tale Heart" | Guilt
Feedback: The hands are just awkward and don't match the rest of the piece. The hands should be holding something, they just look out of place. The eye seems out of place and looks Photoshopped in. Maybe make the eye part of the horizon?
"Pit and the Pendulum" | Torture
Feedback: The wide variation of color brings about a range of emotions, too much to describe torture. Use of trees as texture as does not provoke a torture feel, but more so a wonderland like place.
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